Wednesday, March 24, 2010

how learning is structured in room 5

How learning is structured in Room five
In Room five our learning room five our fist in room five we learn A lot of stuff like maths, reading, topic, in our class we normally spend half and hour to an hour we like to learn so we can get a good education so we can go to university and then get a good job so we can get a lot of money when we are older.
In room 5

In Room 5 rules come second because if school didn’t have rules no one would not learn anything at all. Then no would not get a job and would get not get no money so you would have to get money for the bank or work and income.

In Room 5 P.E comes last because if we don’t get our work finished
On one will we don’t get to do P.E the sports we play are t ball Basket ball soccer/touch and kicking rounder’s and a lot of other sports.

By Paul

1 comment:

  1. Great to see your writing finished Paul. Great to see paragraphs have been used. I like the way you have tried to explain each point - well done!!

    Some points for consideration are:
    - check spelling
    - check full stops at the end of sentences
    - check capital letters for proper nouns and the first word in a sentence.

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